|Reviews for Winter|
| Next Exit 3/30/08 . chapter 1
a wonderful sentiment. nice piece. :)
| moon-behind-dark-clouds 3/29/08 . chapter 1
wow 'the cold that lights up my heart' that line really grabbed me. it is so well written... good job!
| Persica 3/29/08 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. I love winter, too, so it resonates well with me. :)
| right2reality 3/29/08 . chapter 1
I really liked the contrast in this haiku, the conflicting connotations of the word choice. Solid imagery too- good job! Anyways, keep up the good work!