Reviews for She Sits on her Rooftop

Alexandria Smith 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseYou always find some way to completely vex me. I'm embarrassed that this is inspired by me... jeez, Kathleen, thanks. =] I just think this has so much power and beauty. You have a gift, and you've used it well. This poem is once again sad, but the diction and rhyme scheme were amazing. You ALWAYS are so good. Just- well, just job well done. -Alexandria Smith aka. your bestest friend. =]
Needa S 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseSad but an awesome job. Write on!!
simpleplan13 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseThe repetition of the first line in the beginning... was that a fp thing? If it wasn't I didn't like it so much I love the description of her heart imploding... that was a really awesome image. I like this piece because it's really easy to relate to and very sad. Nicely done.