this chapter seemed to personal for me to enjoy. All the killing for some reason doesn't seem like it should be happening just for a stupid kingdom. I think it was the king and the mother comment about the queen that ruined this chapter for me. Alula killing seems really odd too. It was so sudden and he seemed to sweet to do that yet I guess I should've known better. great job!

lol. Alula told Kane.lol. I think Alula will probably handle this whole mission a little better than Kane. they'll get through it togehter though. :)

YES! You're finally moving on to something interesting and no offense, but some of your chapters are just too drawn out for my taste, but then I haven't really been in the mood for this type of story here lately. I like that Kane and Alula are getting closer. :) it's adorable. Awesome job!

wow! So many things are happening! I wonder if things will go as smoothly as they're all hoping. :) great job!

Hm. For some reason I thought Alula and Maurice would get along better than that, but maybe it will just take time...I hope anyway.

Yeah! We got to see more of Alula. I missed the little guy and it still amazes me that Kane and Alula don't seem to spend much time together. :) great job!

:( It's sad. poor Maurice. He seems to be losing almost everything and Kane seems to have gained something. I want the two brothers to be still close. *sniffle* sad, but very good!

:) I still think Alula is completely adorable, but I feel bad for the hole in Maurice's heart. It's like is connection to his brother was removed to allow for Alula's and his to be created. :) great job and its getting so good. Great job!

Alula is too cute in his dragon form. :) The brothers are very connected and I think that's cool. I hope Maurice finds a love that will survive with him too though if he lives long or immortal. :)

I was wondering what you were going to do about Alula's small form and the plans of the dragons. As always, I was delighted to read your writing again and hope that you update soon. I am excited to see what happens next and to see if the rift between the brothers gets any bigger.
Happy writing,
~Shik

:( I don't like that the brothers have lost their closeness. It all seems so sad and bleak now! I hope they get a chance to get together soon. :) great job!

I'm surprised Alula didn't follow Kane, but then the dragon was probably giving him his alone time with his family. Is it safe for Alula to being just walking around? I wonder what is so important. Great job!:)

AH! They're partly bonded. Poor Kane. He's happy, but then gets sad because of his father. I wonder what his brother will think of Alula. Great job!

Finally Kane know he's a dragon! I've been waiting for it the whole time! :) great job!

Kane is getting so close to see the dragons and I want to know how he handles it. :) I
m glad Maurice's plan is going well and I like knowing more about Zev! :) can't wait for more.