 auburnfusion 2008-04-01 . chapter 5Brooke here! Alice knows me. >< I love that Emma and Gregory are two people with ** lives and yet, they're somehow into each other. The fact that they've been woven with intricate and detailed backgrounds just makes them that much more real. I feel like I could spot Emma outside a store or near the supermarket, smoking and watching nonchalantly. Gregory, I feel, I could bump into him anytime.
I really am interested in this story. I can't wait to see what else you have planned next for this duo, plus or minus Jane.
Keep up the whimsically detailed work. This story rocks. |