   no.peace.los.angeles 2008-04-27 . chapter 1I love the wandering jazz stanza; it's so full of life and you made me think twice about street musicians. Really lovely, angsty piece. Keep writing! :) |
 Faith Adeline 2008-03-31 . chapter 1great, original piece. I enjoyed it.
Faith |
 A. Alhazred- John Scott Brewer 2008-03-31 . chapter 1I wanna be wandering jazz...
this sounds like a night with a story to tell.
wow |
 kaylajac 2008-03-29 . chapter 1the repetition in this really works. great job :] |
 East-0f-Eden 2008-03-29 . chapter 1:) |
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