Whoa. That was a shoker. Tico sounds creepy. I wouldn't trust him...yet. I think Pseudo is a shark too! He should meet in battle with Zion. That would be soo cool.

oo! Oo! one is a bird! I liked this! I liked how micah got scared when Leon appeared behind him. hah, that was funny. He's doesn't have all the power! -sticks out toungue at Micah- I read on!

I love how your story isn't all mucky romance, but I think Micah has a little interest in Jackie...or was that Solia. oops, I don't think you explained which girl. Thats okay. Anyway, I really like it! The plot is unfolding!

Thx for the explanation! This was really good, and easier to get now that I know more. IS Zion half-shark? It really seems like it. I love him so much, he's so cute.

It's still really good! I'm luvin this! But I'm still confused about who's who? Is this is a sequal? Could you please, please explain what the gang is, who every one is, there ages, who the enemy are (are they another gang? Or...what?) I'm just confused and I'm far enough into the story that you can't really explain now. Could you send me a pm or something telling me? I love your writing and the story, but I'm kind of lost.

I really, really, really, really like your story! It's amazing, so fast and great and descriptive. I like Jackie, and Solia seems pretty in depth! I'm going to keep reading! The only thing, could you explain a little more about them, or is that coming later? Why are they trapped, who is trapping them, all that jazz. Great work! This is one of the few sci-fi action stories I've found in this section!

ok i did wat i normally do and clicked on an awsome story with out checking the chapters(i hate 3 chapter stories where the author hasn't writen in like YEARS, this actually happened once)and then i remembered this one was on top and so it was a new one (this was at chapter 3)and i looked and u already have 29 chapters up! All I'm saying is WOW! you must have one hell of an imagination!

when I first read the summery I was just like sure just to kill time...but I LOVE IT you have done a wonderful job with your characters and plot...great job and keep it up!

“Right. Home. Whatever you humans call it.” I loved to call a random person ‘human.’ It added a bit of an shock factor, though there wasn’t much to shock with.

It made them think about what I really said.

At least I didn’t call them . . . mortal or something like that. (Though I was known on several occasions to do just that.)

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Lol, I love that. How good would Daniel and Micah get along? (Daniel loves calling people 'mortals', 'specially Shadow and Ash)