 Rubedo Jr. 2009-08-16 . chapter 8Well, I'm glad I listened and took a look at your writing. A little more tame than I was expecting, but each chapter has been enjoyable, and more than amusing, like a slice of life comedy/romance. Of course, each chapter confuses me more and more with who's paired with who, leaving me with more questions than answers.
I wish I knew more about the backgrounds of the characters and their motivations, and just who Tatsuki really likes, and why Shi is so ornery. So many unsolved puzzles...I can't wait to see what the next chapters bring. |
 nyves 2009-08-02 . chapter 8 O, this story always keeps me on my toes, I can never tell what's going to happen next! I love it so much, so please update again soon! Oh, and you have great taste in music ;) |
 nyves 2008-12-01 . chapter 6 Aww, that was such a cute chapter! I was beginning to worry that you wouldn't update again, glad to see you haven't forgotten this awesome story. Please update again really soon! |
 everdean 2008-09-16 . chapter 4This story has me so intrigued, i wanna know wat happens lol. Love it so far but must admit i find all the characters confusing :) |
 HurtMe 2008-07-24 . chapter 4Ah, boy love. It makes the world go 'round. I love this story, it's very original. Good job. |
 Ilze09 2008-07-23 . chapter 4This is really good. You seem to know your characters very well and are doing an excellent job of slowly introducing more and more of their personalities into the story. I can't wait to learn more about Shi, personally. Why does he never want the special treatment and what's this 'secret' San was talking about?
The last chapter was probably my favorite and you took the light-heartedness that makes this story wonderful and threw in a little mystery with the San-Tatsuki conversation. A perfectl blend right there! However, I can't wait until we get a little more into the Romance side of things! (fingers crossed for some Shi smexiness!)
Well, that's it for my review! I can't wait til you update, you seemed to have a knack for shounen-ai, something I admire. I actually just started my first BL story but I'm not sure how it's going. If you could maybe look it over and give me some constructive criticism then that'd be great. Don't feel like you have to though! (now I feel like Ichi, recommending books to Tatsuki.)
Anyways, keep writing. I can't wait to read more! |
 HurtMe 2008-05-18 . chapter 3I really like this...please write more. |
 Ren Elaine 2008-05-17 . chapter 2Amazing. =] I've never really seen a Shonen-ai with much of anything but "Sex-Sex-Sex" hm? You're changing that now! xD Brilliant.
I hope to read more soon, updates quick please? =D
I love how quick but detailed everything is, it keeps the readers from being flooded, and makes them want to keep reading. xD |
 Melissa Norvell 2008-04-27 . chapter 2A beautifully written shounen-ai. I don't remember if I've read this before and I didn't look at your reviews but I read both chapters and I like how this is coming about. You do a great job and as a fellow shounen-ai author I'll definitely be reviewing you more often.
If you wish, feel free to check out some of my works. |
 chibimasa-sama 2008-04-20 . chapter 2Wow. That was amazing. Out of all the Yaoi and Shonen-ai, that one is one I really want to read more of. I always thought that Yaoi and Shonen-ai was like Naruto Yaoi. Like Naruto was the girl and Sasuke the guy in the realationship, but really I am very curious to find out who is going to be with who. Waiting for the next chapter to come out! |
 Open Yazumi's Heart Skulls 2008-03-30 . chapter 1This is interesting, I wanna see where this leads, I never read anything except fanfiction so it's rare for a non fic to interest me, but I like it so far. ^.^
~Yazumi & Skulls / Mika |