Still interesting and still not sure if this story is right for me. I usually like slower beginnings to draw me in then become fast paced but I do and will admit that it is very well written.

Ok this is interesting and different than most stories. One it starts fast, no built up which isn't necessarily bad just different. Second her reaction is a bit too unbelievable not that she can't be strong but there should be some fear evident and more of a surprise to find someone in there with her. Her reaction is kinda like an acquaintance or friend was in there with her. It will be interesting to see where and how this story progresses.

Short and story. Everything was perfect but I would have liked if it was longer and had longer chapters but you are still a mature writer.

That was short O.o

for being so well written I mean.

Fast paced, which I normally hate but you are such a good writer that I won't really complain I guess.

Hm.

huh...cute ! :D

Sorry, but I've just got to say, "aw!" that was such a sweet ending.

"the vision of red hair and lake blue eyes peered up at me"

are you stalking me? lol

it was ok didn't really like the constant change of POV's. I'm sure im not the only one who thought the ending was a bit abrupt.

That was an awesome story, truly amazing. I enjoyed reading it :)

EXCELENT!

you wrote a great short story, that kept me interested, i'm envous i can only write long stories or crappy short ones

that was it as in the end as in no more? ever? aww , thats sad , i wish it was longer...do yuo have a sequel? well , i love it either way , i think it is a really good story! i loved it. it was sweet at the end there...

not bad

OMFG!This story is kick ass! Im like crying rite now...yea I get really emotional !

You should make another story continuing there love life!

I would give it 5 stars

If you dont can you tell me if Declan and Jagati ever get married though in your head?

heii i really lov ur sotry

i liked the pet idea

i lov all that supernatural romance

anyway it waz really really good

xx

i loved it X3. one of the best romance stories ive read on here!