LOL HELLO KITTY

that was a good short. i loved that last line he said, "i think i have been dreaming..." and the song was beatiful. =]

I love, LOVE Sway. I first heard it on the TV show Veronica Mars and so yeah, the moment I saw the familiar lyrics in the summary, I just had to read this story. So, onto the review.

I felt as though the second part didn't really fit in with the rest of the story. You never really explained the whole sickness thing and in the following parts Libby was fine, so I was kinda confused about that whole thing. Like I thought she had cancer, or something...it just didn't mesh with the rest of the story at all. I understand you were trying to show how much Tristan cares about her, but I think that you could've gone about that a different way.

Anyway, I really loved everything else. The first part was so sweet and very realistic, I thought. And I love how Tristan and Libby got together in the end! They're so cute, haha.