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helixdown
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abuseHm? Was this one a continuation of "let's just call this a dream" ?
shadows of a trackless sea
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseaw nice ending. i love your imagery in this it really made certain parts pop out.
simpleplan13
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseI love the whole explosion thing. That was a really beautiful image. I also really like the parenthesis... the only thing I might work on is the punctuation. You have a bunch of periods and I think they look a bit weird in the parenthesis and they also do not always separate sentences. And sometimes you have sentences missing periods. Anyhow other than that, it's a great piece
Faith Adeline
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusegood piece, I really liked it :)
Faith
unshattered
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseI love how this starts off with such despair then leads towards hope. Great transition.
You're very creative with your writing :)
losing gracie girl
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusethis is beautiful.

...idk how else to describe this.

wonderful job.

yours until the wind changes,
gg
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