Reviews for essence of hope - FictionPress.com

helixdown 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuseHm? Was this one a continuation of "let's just call this a dream" ?
shadows of a trackless sea 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseaw nice ending. i love your imagery in this it really made certain parts pop out.
simpleplan13 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseI love the whole explosion thing. That was a really beautiful image. I also really like the parenthesis... the only thing I might work on is the punctuation. You have a bunch of periods and I think they look a bit weird in the parenthesis and they also do not always separate sentences. And sometimes you have sentences missing periods. Anyhow other than that, it's a great piece
Faith Adeline 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusegood piece, I really liked it :) Faith
unshattered 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseI love how this starts off with such despair then leads towards hope. Great transition. You're very creative with your writing :)
losing gracie girl 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusethis is beautiful. ...idk how else to describe this. wonderful job. yours until the wind changes, gg