Hm? Was this one a continuation of "let's just call this a dream" ?

aw nice ending. i love your imagery in this it really made certain parts pop out.

I love the whole explosion thing. That was a really beautiful image. I also really like the parenthesis... the only thing I might work on is the punctuation. You have a bunch of periods and I think they look a bit weird in the parenthesis and they also do not always separate sentences. And sometimes you have sentences missing periods. Anyhow other than that, it's a great piece

good piece, I really liked it :)

Faith

I love how this starts off with such despair then leads towards hope. Great transition.

You're very creative with your writing :)

this is beautiful.

...idk how else to describe this.

wonderful job.

yours until the wind changes,

gg