|Reviews for let's just call this a dream|
| helixdown 7/5/08 . chapter 1
This one was slightly confusing but i think i understand, well, anyways, i'll keep on reading, sorry that my reviews aren't as comprehensive as yours.
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 5/4/08 . chapter 1
it's a sad story for sure but it wasn't all your fault and its nice that you tried to help pick up the pieces but sometimes things are meant to be broken.
| simpleplan13 4/4/08 . chapter 1
but it didn’t matter what you’re heart... your
awaken them because within minutes... I think it might be awoken
I like this piece. The descriptions were really great and it was very bittersweet, especially with the ending. The only thing I didn't like was how you split up temperature... it seemed like it was just there for formatting and it sounded awkward.
The other thing I really liked was the slam thing... nicely done