This one was slightly confusing but i think i understand, well, anyways, i'll keep on reading, sorry that my reviews aren't as comprehensive as yours.

it's a sad story for sure but it wasn't all your fault and its nice that you tried to help pick up the pieces but sometimes things are meant to be broken.

but it didn’t matter what you’re heart... your

awaken them because within minutes... I think it might be awoken

I like this piece. The descriptions were really great and it was very bittersweet, especially with the ending. The only thing I didn't like was how you split up temperature... it seemed like it was just there for formatting and it sounded awkward.

The other thing I really liked was the slam thing... nicely done