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| Arcane D. 2008-03-30 ch 1,  | abuseif it wasn't for the summary i wouldn't have understood the piece. (and there are still parts in which i can't grasp) as far as i can tell, however, this is a rather strange one at that. it's short with literary devices and really just keeps the reader jumping around. what i can make of the poem is a man visiting a 'witch' so i don't know if that was intended or not. possibly a reference to the crucible? i leave a confused, but entertained reader. arcane |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusewalk with me in the forest young goodman Brown. |
| Julius Gillian 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThat last line is summing up the point, or feeling of this piece but I don't understand it. It's an ominus piece, it's sketchy because it doesn't give away too much. I guess I'd have to know more about the witch trials to understand this painting you pictured here. I really want to understand that last line... I'm off to bed if you're not going to come online tonight. |