 Tee Elle Double Yew 2008-03-31 . chapter 1This is a nice poem. it flows really well.
I'm glad I found it.
good work. |
 CrypticCorpse 2008-03-30 . chapter 1one of the best I've ever read! I absolutely adore thim poem |
 fatbird33 2008-03-30 . chapter 1i actually have never wondered where spirits come from, but besides the fact, i think that this poem was very well written. |
 kloun mannequin 2008-03-30 . chapter 1I like the first verse, its a pretty nice tale about the begining of everything I think |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-30 . chapter 1Pretty!
This poem has a dreamy quality to it that I like.
The last stanza is my favorite because it's so comforting and full of hope. |