OH NO!

You can't do this to me...well obviously you can, but that doesn't mean I have to like it...*makes adorable pouty face* Hehehe But no in all seriousness this is a fantastic story so far. I'm always amazed at how easily I am immersed into your stories and brave new worlds! Again, rich descriptive characterizations, description, and dialogue. Khris makes for a great youthful hero, and I love how friendship with Glen...I was hoping for some future slashiness...hehe I was really excited that this was a continuation of your one shot! I'm so glad you decided to develop it more...

Anyway, I do hope I may read more about this great characters, as always. :)

And it seemed like you went to some great cities here in America! I haven't even been to Frisco and Vegas! Lol

I know that trip was a while ago...but still!

XOXO

Nice chapter. And congratulations on the Uni acceptance! But US? You should definitely visit Canada. Much nicer. Although I might be a bit biased.

StarSplit

Dun dun dun...

Nice chapter, good to see this one updated again.

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nice so far keep it up

Pretty good. So school being crazy? I know that feeling definitely. And I hope you feel more yourself soon. Glad you took the time to write anything.

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Nice, clear prose. I truly appreciate it. I'd watch some of the dialog. For instance "swing that way" doesn't seem to belong in an era of castles and guard changes and swords.

Sounds interesting so far. Hope you're doing okay, and looking forward to more of any of your stories.

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