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| blair powers 2008-07-25 ch 1,  | abusethis is awesome! you should so totally write a sequel type thing - that would be excellent! great job :) |
| stunninglyaverage 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseAw... I LOVED IT. It might have been cliche, but not too much. You write it so that I didn't know what was going to happen at all times. Good job. :D |
| HmongTuasNthi 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseAww!! Loved the ending! Cute oneshot! |
| RoseLife 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseHAHA very cheesy! but thats what we love! great job ^.^ |
| emotionless-stares 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWell written. I love it. It shows how love can't break them apart huh? |
| rathaa 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseOh. Wow. that was soo cute! and you wrote it so beautifully! wow.. speechless! so cute! |
| lilMissRawr 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness. Lovely, as simply as I can put it. Completely adorable to say the least; and undeniable sweet and beautiful. I completely adored it, and I thought you did absolutely wonderful. I truly loved this one, and I hope to read your others soon and see that they are just as good. Which I have no doubt of them being. :] |
| gulistanlik 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI don't care if it was cheesy/cliched- I loved it! *SQUEE* AW! Incredibly sweet! Man, I seriously love your one-shots! That's it. You're definitely favourited. gulistanlik |
| IndigoAzucena 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseSO PERFECT so perfect If only life were like that. Ugh, I'm so jealous of your writing skills |
| hippi926840 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseSUPER CUTE I LOVE IT |
| negenki 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseaw...that was really touching...it's a good read, common in the clique but it's an ultra read. brought tears to my eyes V.V |
| bellabewitched 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseAW that was so cute! sorry... on a high of cuteness... yeah... I love all your one shots! I honestly think that they are amazing... I think maybe you should try to write M, try to mature your writing a bit |
| d666lisa 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI'm sat in the middle of an hospital ward smiling like a complete idiot because of the last line :) Good story, cliched but everybody needs a bit of fluff in their lives right? :) |
| Venus Smurf1 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseFabulous. Absolutely fabulous. I was grinning like a complete loon by the end. I think I adore you. |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseOh but of course it's too cheesy/cliched. XD That's why we love it. (: I love the characters and the interesting way in how they met, and how they interact with each other. Translation: I love this oneshot, and the only reason I'm not glad artistic dreamer added it to our c2 is because I want to add it. XD |