Aww. That was sweet. It was a tiny bit cheesy and cliched, but in the best way possible. And It had some original ideas in it too. The best of luck to Alicia and Ashton!

Liz

I don't care if anyone else out there thought this was cheesy... I loved it! :D

This must be the simplest, yet heartwarming story that I have ever read. :)

So freakin cute.

I enjoy reading stories like this!

-ZH

SDLF/KSL;DFK AW that was an awesome way for her to suck up and tell him her feelings XD

very sweet.

liked the story, i believed the characters. i cared for them.

Aw! *explodes from the lovey dovey*

This is awesome! Brilliant! Implosive? . Uh, I would add more but then I'd need to be smart for that. Anyways, this was just great! And it totally made my day!

I really enjoyed the twist in the ending. I didn't actually expect him to suddenly turn around and say he'd be going to! :P

My relationship with my bf is pretty much pure cheesiness and cliche, so I can actually see some realism to the ending. xD

Lovely writing style, too. You're brilliant. :)

IT'S SO SWEET! I LOVE THE ENDING!

I really like the line "Then I'll marry you, and you don't have to do a thing except for loving me… And making me breakfast."

XD

Most def cute :P

) that was so sweet.

the name reminds me of the evil LOTR guy though.

Aw, that was so sweet! I loved it! It was so cute! Loved it! Actually, it is much better than I expected...the summary put me off so many times. BUt, it was worth reading, I'm really glad that I did!

Aw.

So perfect.

Aw.. That's so cute!) Sweet!

That's incredibly cute. [teary eyes] .