this is soo cute. i'm sure those are tears that are running down my left cheek right now. naw it's so sweet. i love the bit where he farts. i laughed so hard my dad asked me what was wrong with me XD

Ohmygosh I'm actually breathless!

It was so beautiful

Your stories are so cute they make me wish I had childhood biffles

oh my gosh, my heart feels like it's a giant pile of mush. all i want to do is go "aww" and giggle. that was such an adorable story!

So cute and sweet. I like cheesy stuffs, they never fail to entertain me.

aww...very cute!

i loved both of them

very nice...i'm liking the geeky heroes of your stories more than the supposedly "gorgeous" unrealistic arrogant jerks of other stories...good job

It's cheesy! It's super duper cheesy!

But what the heck? I love cheese! And cliches and other sappy things! Haha, sweet of him to message her like that!

Sigh, happy endings. Gotta love em :D

awe!

I LOVE THIS , SO MUCH !

AMAZING!

keep writing, you have a beautiful imagination!

-saraelle :)

Should've known how it'd end but aw... Cute.

Face paced, a little cliche, but still a good read.

THAT WAS SO GOODD! AH!

Ohh, loved it! I liked how the relationshop builds and also Ashton's character.

Please write more. (:

OMG. Hilarious, sweet, and romantic all rolled into one.

I've never read a better one-shot!

OMG. This is so going on my faves!

(btw that fart-part [ooh rhyme!] was priceless!)

oh my god

I LOVE THIS.

*squeals*

That was really sweet and cute.