HAHA

very cheesy!

but thats what we love!

great job .

Well written. I love it. It shows how love can't break them apart huh?

Oh. Wow. that was soo cute! and you wrote it so beautifully! wow.. speechless! so cute!

Oh my goodness.

Lovely, as simply as I can put it. Completely adorable to say the least; and undeniable sweet and beautiful. I completely adored it, and I thought you did absolutely wonderful. I truly loved this one, and I hope to read your others soon and see that they are just as good.

Which I have no doubt of them being. :]

I don't care if it was cheesy/cliched- I loved it! *SQUEE* AW! Incredibly sweet! Man, I seriously love your one-shots! That's it. You're definitely favourited.

gulistanlik

SO PERFECT

so perfect

If only life were like that.

Ugh, I'm so jealous of your writing skills

SUPER CUTE

I LOVE IT

aw...that was really touching...it's a good read, common in the clique but it's an ultra read. brought tears to my eyes V.V

AW that was so cute! sorry... on a high of cuteness... yeah... I love all your one shots! I honestly think that they are amazing... I think maybe you should try to write M, try to mature your writing a bit

I'm sat in the middle of an hospital ward smiling like a complete idiot because of the last line :) Good story, cliched but everybody needs a bit of fluff in their lives right? :)

Fabulous. Absolutely fabulous. I was grinning like a complete loon by the end. I think I adore you.

Oh but of course it's too cheesy/cliched. XD That's why we love it. (:

I love the characters and the interesting way in how they met, and how they interact with each other. Translation: I love this oneshot, and the only reason I'm not glad artistic dreamer added it to our c2 is because I want to add it. XD

no, its extremely cute!

omg, i thought they were realli gonna leave each other, i was about to cry..

Argh! Good job! Extremely realistic, well written and cute! It's sorta cliche but I love how you've portrayed the passing of time and how love grew with them! Anyways, good job - write more!