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| McKinley Cooper 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseYES McKinley |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseUnique and solid imagery, great word choice- I thought this was a fantastic haiku. Keep up the good work! -D.S |
| electric feel 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusei love this |
| diffident 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThis haiku is so violent... I can't help but love it. marie |
| perpetual questions 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusethe imagery and metaphors are just stunning. |
| ilovetheopera 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseconcisely put. i like the thing you say about the horizon, i never thought of it that way before. as if the days resist turning anew, again and again. |
| someone vague 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseno criticisms here, just wanted to tell you that this is a very well written haiku. nice job. |