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McKinley Cooper
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseYES


McKinley
Thoughtful Silence
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseUnique and solid imagery, great word choice- I thought this was a fantastic haiku. Keep up the good work!

-D.S
electric feel
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusei love this
diffident
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseThis haiku is so violent... I can't help but love it.

marie
perpetual questions
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusethe imagery and metaphors are just stunning.
ilovetheopera
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseconcisely put.

i like the thing you say about the horizon, i never thought of it that way before. as if the days resist turning anew, again and again.
someone vague
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseno criticisms here, just wanted to tell you that this is a very well written haiku. nice job.
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