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| tonight we storm 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abusemy favorite lines are "forgetting our sins/and staring to the heavens," i like the contradictory feel to it |
| eville 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuse'our backs kiss the grass...' i love that. =] x |
| electric feel 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseour backs kiss the grass i like this two people are part of the nature |
| glimpses from an ivory towe... 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuse"see, the world doesn't matter at times like these when only we exist as if we were the stars themselves" stunningly beautiful. so brief, but you captured the moment perfectly. |
| ilovetheopera 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusenicely ambiguous and somewhat romantic, and stars will never be an overdone topic. |