|Reviews for Dark Vignette|
| me. moi. ich 3/30/08 . chapter 1
i like the way you separate that one stanza from the others- like a little side note/thought.. very nice
| Tranquil Thorns 3/30/08 . chapter 1
I especially like the fact that those lines (Wait... what?) are off to the side. To me, it's almost like an after-thought, a whisper, as if the narrator steps aside for a moment to 'consult' with himself.
Did you intend it that way?