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| electric feel 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abusei love the last line, it introduces a new theme and makes this more transcendent |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseNice haiku. I got a little confused with your placement of a period after the second line, though. Is it supposed to flow into the third? Because I thought that the third should be a connection of the second. Er, I'm confusing myself. |