I never reviewed this one.

I really liked it though. Interesting word choice. It's like I've never seen a smile described that way, but I can imagine what it looks like.

This sounds like a Hindu belief. Yeah, I know that's really random, but in Hinduism the demons that the gods are always fighting are the evil within themselves and by manifesting these demons they hope to cleanse themselves, and yadda, yadda, I have no idea where I'm going with this.

I like the poem especially the prostitute smile bit. It reminds me of a predator for some reason

You never cease to amaze me.

wow, I don't know what to say.. I found something "amazing" in this but...

Creepy... and I love it! It makes for good character material for a longer story, and I just love the paradox (or is it paradoxe in english too?^^), cleansing his body from evil with blood and fury, very interesting! Write more of those, I love it!!

very intriguing.. it leaves me longing to know more. I liked the "prostitute smile" .. it sounds at once menacing and captivating.