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rust phoenix 2008-07-22 ch 1,	abuseIt's different. It reminds me of beat poetry, and I like that, and I like the idea. It's also got a nice look to it. I feel like there could be more to it, like this would be an excellent introduction to something, like a song or poem or even a piece of prose, but by itself, even though I love all the lines in it, it doesn't seem quite finished.
shola 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseIt's a very tactile sort of poem. Sexy in that way. Winding your tongue around the words is really quite...ahem... I like this. It's a different voice for you. Which is hard to do. You can change your style over and over without finding another voice. Yes yes, I like this very very much
jessee parker 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseah! i don't know how i feel about this. i feel like it's a half and half poem. sometimes i love it and sometimes i am just too confused by it. i feel like maybe if the rhythm on the top was the same as on the bottom it would be the most amazing piece ever, but as it is it just seems kind of raw or naked or something. but at the same time i really love it because it's quirky... like everything almost goes together perfectly but then the extra two syllables on the bottom just give it this intentional punch of oddity. i am conflicted.
astral boy 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseWell usually I dislike the style you've used (not entirely sure what to call it), to the point of being annoyed by it. But it works here and I do like this. The seperation of the two words really emphasises the "breaking apart" feeling... and it -feels good- to read, kinda like you're describing. It isn't pointless and simply to look good, or in attempt to hide something ordinary as different. Sorry for all that, but yeah, I liked it. And thanks for your review.
RepulsiveGravity 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I checked out some of your other stuff, I really like the way you write.

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