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fairytale failure
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abusePossibly change the lines to
'i think i might have messed up
this love thing again'?
Or, maybe that doesn't work as well - but I feel like 'messed up' should go together.
losing gracie girl
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuselol.
nice.

and no...u can't..

yours until the wind changes,
gg
Paradise L.
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusei like it :D
seriously wish things were that easy ><

Paradise L.
Hearts Stars and Broken Bon...
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseif only it was that easy.
this is pretty =]

k.X
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