Reviews for the falling in love bit

fairytale failure 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseAw, I love this one. I definitely can relate to the first stanza - 'i mean he isnt /that/ great', but even so... I liked the image of the vacuum cleaner a lot, especially how I could picture you spinning around in the vacuum cleaner bowl. I don't know if 'hastily' is the right word for that situation though, it usually means that something is done rashly, or done too quickly to be a good idea. Maybe that's what you were going for though? I also liked the part at the end, where you interrupted yourself before you could go on writing him more love poetry. I think the ending, 'ridiculous...', would be more effective if you had a period, a full stop, instead of the ellipsis.
losing gracie girl 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusethis is beautiful and amazing and i know how u feel! yours until the wind changes, gg
Hearts Stars and Broken Bon... 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusewow, this is exactly how i feel right now! i hope it works out for you =] k.X