Reviews for Such A Good Kid - FictionPress.com

jessieleigh916 2008-07-13 ch 1,	abusei love it :]]
ShockingReality 2008-07-06 ch 1,	abuseSo real - on the outside anybody can seem like a wonderful person but end up to be someone entirely different. Great poem
ShesJustAPerson 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abusewow. I don't know how you were wanting it to be interpretated but I thought it was really emotional with out showing it. Not sure you understand what I mean but I like it.
Poetryfreak173 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseLulled me, then shot me you did.
Kohnitz 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusethis is... insane. BUT I LOVE IT. most of it is so true. ):
Sam Garrett 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was corny. I mean, not as corny as angst poetry, but still pretty damn corny. :T
theredkatana 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseDamnit, foiled again... But seriously, this is really good. The duality is great and very perceptive.
In the Rye 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusei only really like the first two lines. because when the mormons would come to our school to spread the word, we'd take the pocket bibles they handed out just for some free rolling paper. haha. it felt like the rest was sort of cliche and redundant. instead of saying "he gives...he slept..." maybe try "he gives...because he slept..." or "although" or "however" try using some of those words, just to break up the redundancy.