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Reviews For: A Valley of Sunshine

Poetryfreak173
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseBad break-up?
kelsi bones
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusei call you sunshine! =]

this is so beautiful. it has amazing imagery, and i can really feel the speaker's emotions.

third line second stanza, "you're" should be "your".

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