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| Poetryfreak173 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseBad break-up? |
| kelsi bones 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusei call you sunshine! =] this is so beautiful. it has amazing imagery, and i can really feel the speaker's emotions. third line second stanza, "you're" should be "your". |