Hi There

Great story, I love the characters and the plot is shaping up to be really good.

Sory, but my nerdy self is trying to get out. According to this, Pierce is the son of Aphrodite and Artemis. Artemis is a girl. and we can't even have a homosexual relationship here, because Artemis is known as one of the virgin goddesses... Sorry.

BUT, all is not lost. If you replaced her with her twin brother Apollo, it would all work out. Apollo was said to be the epitome of male beauty, a trait which Pierce has obviously inherited ;)

You really need to update this story I think it's awesome and it's very disapointing to see if it's been updated and yet it has not been. Please up date this story I beg you.

WOW great chapter... i love the whole story- it took me three days to read it because of the twilight movie and my friends. I loved it!

UPdate Soon!

~LExi~

Wow!! Well, i just read everything you posted for this story, and I am really enjoying it. It's just my style!! I love Isabel. Her character is so strong, despite the fact that she cries almost constantly. Pierce, hm. I don't know if I like him or not. I've yet to decide. Even though the inevitable romance between them is a bit cliche, what would the world be without cliche? Oh, and I think Pierce was the one who pushed her from the Gates and sent her to earth. Am i right or am I right?

Lovely chapter! Keep on updating. By the way, Artemis is a goddess, not a god.

update soon!

nice~! hope to see more of the upcoming chapters, im really interested in the development between isabel and pierce. good luck in writing the next chap!

I've read all the chapters so far and you've got me hooked. Apart from a few spelling errors, everything is perfect. Can't wait to read the rest!

good update.. ur preview confused me.. but i think im suppose to be confused haha . update soon! and i cant wait till pierce and Isabel fall in love. thats a long time away i think.

Where did she want to go with the car...hm...*wink wink*

And since when are these two getting along. Personally I prefer it when they are arguing. Makes it more exciting. LMAO

Last but not least...your preview is mad creepy. When i was done reading it I looked down at Shadow like Wtf. Ur badonk better update soon. =D

Yo! No fair!! Why can't someone leave me a letter like that when I wake up. Sheesh!

I'm so freaking envious.

Anyways...bravo!

Take a bow. But watch your badonk hehehe ;).

Oh, no problem. I write too, I know how addicting reviews are.
That is... That is brilliant. Eagerly awaiting more.
Be seeing you.

YES! new chapter.
next chapter is her last day. yay!
next chapter sounds umm. . . weird?

update when possible.

Wow! My step dad's name is, Carl. O.O My friend Bri always makes fun of it. Saying it sounds like a tarts name and then she says it in a weird way. It was funny. Aw. . . I wish hot guys would appear in my room at night. Heheheh. Aw, and it would be uber cool if he was hot and I could hug him! -Stares at Ruki- Heheh, how will I find you? -wiggles eyebrows- Okay, I think I'm done being perverted and creepy. . . for now. . . -evil laugh-

Poor Pierce must be like, 'wtf is WITH this chick?' I was feeling cold all last week. It wasn't even right. I had to wear sweaters when it was like, 80 degrees outside. Not normal. But I didn't feel too sick so it was all good.

Yesh, sometimes a good rant helps. You just need to find someone that will let you rant to them. And not someone who just does it for gossip either, those people are **. Damn, Pierce doesn't really seem to care at the moment does he? What a butt, hm, but a awesome butt. Heheh, double meaning, double meaning. ;)

Ha ha! Wow, so female Goddess get all emotional too? So it makes sense that the males would be like “oh **, what do I do? Is this PMS-ing? I've never seen it in action before—oh **, what if she starts throwing things? Does she want me to say something, do something? Dammit woman what the ** do you want from me?!”

Ha ha! Go on and laugh, you know that's funny.

Wow, if someone asked me, “Is this why you wanted to see me?” I would've been like, “No, but you know what? You and your smexy ** can sit there and listen to me wail and ** and do you know why? Cause I OWN you now **! Now shut up and let me continue! We'll get to why I wanted to see you in a second. Now, blah blah blah, cry cry cry, hit hit hit (light hits of course) okay, now was that so hard? -looks at traumatized boy- I didn't think so.”

I'd get distracted by that hot piece of ** too. Whenever I hear the word 'Cult' I think of like, Satin people for SOME reason. I blame it on Foamy. Lol! I wouldn't want to be forgotten, but there are some things I wouldn't mind forgetting. O.o Wow, he goes from uncaring to sensitive and sweet. . . I LOVE HIM! (lol) I think I've already made clear who my favorite character is. . . Heheheh.

Oi! I love Izzy's reaction! So adorable! But Pierce must be like 'wtf?' lol. I love how she just clutches onto him like Elisavet's beauty is going to cause her physical pain. I can see me doing that if I saw Ruki. Clutch onto the person closest to me and be like a kitty crawling up their back and on their head like 'OMG! OMG OMG OMG! OMFG!. . . he's so hot. . .'

Sparkly. . . reminds me of Tinker Bell. Heheh. CUTE!

Very good chappie! I hope you write more soon so I can read more soon! ::Smooches:: MUCH LOVE!

P.S. you put shock instead of shook. ;)

interesting...

look up the difference between cease and seize... it's distracting when you interchange those two