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| Isabella DeMontegro 2008-06-26 ch 5, | abuseLovely chapter! Keep on updating. By the way, Artemis is a goddess, not a god. |
| TaurusGirl7 2008-06-07 ch 5, | abuseupdate soon! |
| missraggamuffin 2008-05-29 ch 5, | abusenice~! hope to see more of the upcoming chapters, im really interested in the development between isabel and pierce. good luck in writing the next chap! |
| loxy 2008-05-20 ch 5, | abuseI've read all the chapters so far and you've got me hooked. Apart from a few spelling errors, everything is perfect. Can't wait to read the rest! |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abusegood update.. ur preview confused me.. but i think im suppose to be confused haha . update soon! and i cant wait till pierce and Isabel fall in love. thats a long time away i think. |
| SoHowAreDelusionsOutWon 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abuseWhere did she want to go with the car...hm...*wink wink* And since when are these two getting along. Personally I prefer it when they are arguing. Makes it more exciting. LMAO Last but not least...your preview is mad creepy. When i was done reading it I looked down at Shadow like Wtf. Ur badonk better update soon. =D |
| SoHowAreDelusionsOutWon 2008-05-18 ch 4, | abuseYo! No fair!! Why can't someone leave me a letter like that when I wake up. Sheesh! I'm so freaking envious. Anyways...bravo! Take a bow. But watch your badonk hehehe ;). |
| SilentSorrowInEmptyBoats 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abuseOh, no problem. I write too, I know how addicting reviews are. That is... That is brilliant. Eagerly awaiting more. Be seeing you. |
| Jayjack 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abuseYES! new chapter. next chapter is her last day. yay! next chapter sounds umm. . . weird? update when possible. |
| Bleeding White Lily 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abuseWow! My step dad's name is, Carl. O.O My friend Bri always makes fun of it. Saying it sounds like a tarts name and then she says it in a weird way. It was funny. Aw. . . I wish hot guys would appear in my room at night. Heheheh. Aw, and it would be uber cool if he was hot and I could hug him! -Stares at Ruki- Heheh, how will I find you? -wiggles eyebrows- Okay, I think I'm done being perverted and creepy. . . for now. . . -evil laugh- Poor Pierce must be like, 'wtf is WITH this chick?' I was feeling cold all last week. It wasn't even right. I had to wear sweaters when it was like, 80 degrees outside. Not normal. But I didn't feel too sick so it was all good. Yesh, sometimes a good rant helps. You just need to find someone that will let you rant to them. And not someone who just does it for gossip either, those people are **. Damn, Pierce doesn't really seem to care at the moment does he? What a butt, hm, but a awesome butt. Heheh, double meaning, double meaning. ;) Ha ha! Wow, so female Goddess get all emotional too? So it makes sense that the males would be like “oh **, what do I do? Is this PMS-ing? I've never seen it in action before—oh **, what if she starts throwing things? Does she want me to say something, do something? Dammit woman what the ** do you want from me?!” Ha ha! Go on and laugh, you know that's funny. Wow, if someone asked me, “Is this why you wanted to see me?” I would've been like, “No, but you know what? You and your smexy ** can sit there and listen to me wail and ** and do you know why? Cause I OWN you now **! Now shut up and let me continue! We'll get to why I wanted to see you in a second. Now, blah blah blah, cry cry cry, hit hit hit (light hits of course) okay, now was that so hard? -looks at traumatized boy- I didn't think so.” I'd get distracted by that hot piece of ** too. Whenever I hear the word 'Cult' I think of like, Satin people for SOME reason. I blame it on Foamy. Lol! I wouldn't want to be forgotten, but there are some things I wouldn't mind forgetting. O.o Wow, he goes from uncaring to sensitive and sweet. . . I LOVE HIM! (lol) I think I've already made clear who my favorite character is. . . Heheheh. Oi! I love Izzy's reaction! So adorable! But Pierce must be like 'wtf?' lol. I love how she just clutches onto him like Elisavet's beauty is going to cause her physical pain. I can see me doing that if I saw Ruki. Clutch onto the person closest to me and be like a kitty crawling up their back and on their head like 'OMG! OMG OMG OMG! OMFG!. . . he's so hot. . .' Sparkly. . . reminds me of Tinker Bell. Heheh. CUTE! Very good chappie! I hope you write more soon so I can read more soon! ::Smooches:: MUCH LOVE! P.S. you put shock instead of shook. ;) |
| MayaD 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseinteresting... look up the difference between cease and seize... it's distracting when you interchange those two |
| Bleeding White Lily 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseI REALLY like how you described about the colors! That was a very creative and nice touch! I liked the blue and grey part...reminded me of someone, ha ha! Oh my god I thought the note was from Pierce! Ha ha! So hey, the first part was a glimpse from the past right? Was it Izzy dreaming it or something? OH! That IS Pierce's note! HA HA! I'm SO smart! Doctors DO seem to scribble don't they? Sometimes I look at it and go “Wait, what the hell am I getting here? Could you elaborate please?” I love how you compared her remembering to a tsunami! I love it when people use metaphors and such like that! Ha ha, Pierce is a nosy old lady! XD I'm really starting to love Izzy's character! She's so cute! Damn if she's not going to be there anymore screw the tests. Ha ha. Wow, you switched POVS. Swee~t! XD Ha ha! Pierce has some admirers! Hell if I saw a guy like that I'd smile at him! ;) Ah, my question has been answered! So Zeus is the one in control! XD SWEET! That perverted God. I wonder if Piece is another one of his MANY children with someone other than his wife Hera, he's such a pig. I remember reading one legend where Hera was ** off at him and did something—can't remember what. Then there's the beauty contest she was in with Aphrodite. I forgot why she didn't win though. Ha ha! Oh! My question was just answered! Now I wonder if I'll get to see his mother's name. . . Ha ha, he thought of her as a monster? That's so horrible! Ah, but she's a smexy girl now! Uh oh Oreo! I like grey eyes, people say it's all dull and stuff but I LIKE it! Ha ha, one big head ache? He sounds like a husband or a father complaining about his wife or daughter. Ha ha, uh oh we have an anorectic in here! QUICK GIVE HER SOME COOKIES! Aw, Izzy took the college girls pretty boy. I'd cry, 'NOT MY EYE CANDY!' if someone took Ruki away! Lol. Uh oh! Izzy's on a roll! She's really ** off at him. . . Damn perverted thoughts won't leave my mind alone! O.O OH! She got TOLD! Yeah, my mom always tells me to 'drop my tone' or 'don't use that tone with me' it gets annoying! Especially when I'm not even USING a tone! Ah ha! Her elbowing him SO backfired! Or did she plan it. . . hm. . . I would have. . . I guess I'm just a little demon like that, ha ha! Wow, he brings up her staring problems a lot. I bet he likes it, or maybe he's embarrassed! Oh! WOW! You made me feel Izzy's pain about being separated from her family and friends! You did such a good job at explaining her every feeling! KUDOS TO THE MAXIMUM! :D I Love how you word it! Damn, I either missed it or forgot that Izzy was adopted. I feel for them, i know how hurtful it is to just have ONE parent abandon you but Both? Damn. I can understand why she wouldn't want to leave just to start all that acting crap all over again. Poor thing. I bet Pierce is the one who threw her out of Heaven! O.O They're engaged?! O.O Lucky her. . . Oh my god this song would so fit what I get from Pierce so far! Like, how Izzy annoys him but I bet he'll fall for her anyway. . . there's this song with lyrics like, I hate everything about you Why do I love you? You hate everything about me Why do you love me? I hate you hate I hate You love me The song just POPPED in my head when I read this! Ah! What does she want him to do? Make sweet love to her? (jk lol!) I'm so perverted I think I could be considered disabled! Is Chico going with her? The Greek Gods. . . EROS AND PSHYCE! EROS AND PSHYCE! Erhm, -looks up- I think I should stop now or else I'll be giving you a whole novel to read! Ha ha! This is my longest review EVER! XD This has to be my favorite chapter of the story so far! :D Of course, when they get together or kiss I'll Love that one too. Heheh. Update when you can! ;) |
| SilentSorrowInEmptyBoats 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseOoh, lovely. :D |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseyay u updated.. pierce says they wont make a good couple?!?! i think they would make a great couple. i think hes just denying it to himself. but update soon |
| Jayjack 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseo i like it so far. update when possible. i would write more but i kind of have to go to bed. :/ |