eek, this could be the epitome of cute writing! Aii, it was so damn cute. You really know how to end something. Cutecutecute.

The guy's reaction was adorable. It made me smile and feel sad for him. I thought he might have been the "the little kid" by mistakingly reading, "He just kept on calling me names," for "Hey, just keep on calling me names."

So that's when and where I got the idea. Don't I feel special.

:)

Aw, come on! This story was not destined to stay a one shot! It is begging to be continued!
But, other than that, good job. This is very cute.

I almost wish that there was more to this story, you know? But otherwise I liked it a lot. = D

Love,
Becca

Cute! And clever!

It was really cute and made me laugh. Especially b/c I figured out he was the boy before she did. hehehehe

That was such a short and sweet one-shot! I loved it! I know you probably don't intend to make it into a story, but if you do, i'll enjoy reading it!~