well..its like hearing the story of Jesus cruxifiction in the form of a poem..i reli like the fact that u hold Jesus into your heart and how u express it in your poem..i would reli like to hear the ironic of how man cause disasters and ignorantly blames the Creator over it..unfortunately, most of mankind r subjected to the sins of the world, and i would reli love to read your work if u ever come up with a poem regarding the ignorance of mankind and the irony of not depending on the Lord our saviour

Best wishes,

/\ucifer13

p.s- my penname doesn mean im anti-Christ )

Beautifully done. Write on and God Bless.

oh my that was so true. i think bout that all the time. ur poem is so true! i really