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| english summer rain 2008-07-06 ch 1,  | abuselast stanza is wonderful. not so sure what i can say about this, except you portray what you're trying to say well, without using complex vocabulary. sometimes simple is best, and especially in this. great work :) |
| friend 49 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI feel this way almost every night when I go to bed. I think the first paragraph is very strong, and it caught me. Excellent job! |
| electric feel 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusei really like the way some lines are broken up and the 3rd paragraph is my favorite |
| britishslang 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuse"and measure bliss in shotglasses" I really like this line. :] Beautiful poem. |