Reviews for the empty silver heart

a silenced revolution 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abusebeautifully tragic. i like the repetition of the first two lines; it's effective. nicely done piece.
Quoven 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseWell-written. This has struck a cord with me in my dealings with college relationships. Glad I'm not alone out here...
Lady Fingers 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abuseand when i ask you to explain you say you gotta be cruel to be kind in the reason in the right measure
the face in the window 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abusei thought this was very beaitful. nice write. rowan.
Blissfully Sarcastic 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseHonestly? I don't much like it. The ending was amazing, but the rest was just... Too straight forward and boring. The wording doesn't fit the piece, it should be a little more complex at least; flowing and poetic, maybe.
caralita 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusethis is gorgeous. just everything about it.