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dorome 2009-10-25 . chapter 15
Geez, how can you do this to unsuspecting readers. I stumbled over this story an clearly loved it. But now it is at its worst point and i donnot even know if you will ever continue it. Ah, i think i will simply loose my sanity here... Okay, i am exxagerating, but only a bit. PLS continue. Rescue Josh or i have to believe Rage killed him and Render drowned himslef over the loss. PLS!
Cafebookworm 2009-07-06 . chapter 15
Um...wow. Poor Josh, but the kid really should've known better than to get in a car with Rage. I'm really enjoying this story, I like your writing style.
Gabriella(too lazy to sign up) 2009-06-28 . chapter 15
*sudden cartoon bug eyes* OH MY GOD! IT'S BEEN UPDATED! *faints from shock* (btw, congrats, Your free from school, ...or... at least until college...)
Tisha-Nichole 2009-06-24 . chapter 10
hum rage dosen't seem like any juggalo I know neather dose keylee... (lette) wise. Haha most juggalos sapport you no matter what Ha, I should know Ive done some prty stupid shit and once dissaperred on everyone for a year and they still stood by my side lol. Any ways Im only on chapter 10 but I love the story so far.
HurtMe 2009-06-14 . chapter 15
While I am incredibly grateful for this wonderful update, there are several typo's. It's mostly missing words, and it seems like you typed this in a rush. The plot is wonderful, I would just suggest reading through this chapter again.
Rinkika 2009-06-05 . chapter 15
Woah, it's been a while! I had forgotten what this was (when I got the email), let alone how much I loved it. It didn't take me long to figure either of those things out though.

Congratulations on graduating high school.
Hopefully you won't be too busy and I can go back to being in love with this fiction without having separation anxiety and symptoms of withdrawal.

Update soon, kay?!

X0X0
R!N
Blo0d StaiNed Rose 2009-05-30 . chapter 15
omg!! i need more...pls update soon...what would happen to poor josh now..:( pls update soon :)
Catseye*Rose 2009-05-28 . chapter 15
Ack! I knew Rage would get his hands on him! D: And now he's in a forest. This...doesn't look like it'll go well. Unless Render can stage some awesome rescue mission. Which I'm sure he can. Cuz he's cool like that :3 Oh, and that's one helluva position for your parents to find you. Ouch. Hm...wonder what's going to happen to him now? D:
midnights scream 2009-05-28 . chapter 15
abandoning this story is impossible. I totally didn't see his parents walking in on him and Render. Why did he get in the car? You can tell he was distraught about Render and his parents. He's not thinking straight! Poor thing! I didn't think Render is going to be able to save him that quickly either, but one can hope. Hope you update soon! This is a great story!
Kaybug150 2009-05-28 . chapter 15
I'm so glad you've finally updated. I've been dying to know what was going to happen. Damn, that Rage is one frightening, desperate man. . .
Gabriella 2009-05-07 . chapter 14
please, please, pleaassee tell me you didn't just abandon this story. I love it way too much and have unintentionally gotten hooked since I found it last night right before my computer crashed. I was hooked after the first two chapters and am no less hooked now after the 14th.
Kj 2009-02-20 . chapter 14
Please keep writing this story!! I love it! I just want to know what happens next!!

Love,

Kj, xoxoxoxo
cobraqueen17 2008-12-22 . chapter 14
Mean mean mean evil mean mean mean evil. But oh so approciated.
HurtMe 2008-11-28 . chapter 14
Ah, you know I love it. You know that I am as addicted to this story as I have ever been. Ah. Just ah. I kind of want to kill Tiss. Slowly. Painfully. Oops, I guess that's the sadist coming out. But about Renny...well, i think you can imagine what I want to do to Renny. I like how Renny reacted to the scene in the club...I would never put up with that from my sub either. Not that I could ever compare to Renny. Now...about this person coming in the door, that is not okay to do! No, I'm kidding, it's your story, you can do what you want. But seriously, update sooner this time, would you? Oh, and check your myspace, you have a message from me that I couldnt put in here.
Catseye*Rose 2008-11-28 . chapter 14
I love Skull Fuck ^^ There's just something about it... Hm, Tiss just seems get creepier per appearance...but Render just gets more awesome ^^ Ah, poor Josh... :O Did his parents return early? If so; er...awkward O_o
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