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| Alphabetical Dreams 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusewow! that's amazing! i love how you repeated the first two lines to wrap up the poem, it makes a very neat, conclusive package of a poem. i have a questionk, though: was the last line of the first stanza supposed to sort of trail off? becuase it seemed a little abrupt. |
| heartbroken922 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusenicely written. i loved it! great job! |