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Alphabetical Dreams
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abusewow! that's amazing! i love how you repeated the first two lines to wrap up the poem, it makes a very neat, conclusive package of a poem. i have a questionk, though: was the last line of the first stanza supposed to sort of trail off? becuase it seemed a little abrupt.
heartbroken922
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abusenicely written. i loved it! great job!
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