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| Lady Fingers 2008-04-28 ch 1,  | abuseomg i love this so much i said that out loud just now during class as the kids beside me tapped quietly with their own thoughts drowning mine and i re read each line just to make sure i was reading it right and how i wish i could have a conversation with someone like this one and how it reminds me souly of wolf and how our conversations were vaugley similar and how when i said: "Oh my god i love this." no one made a sound. |
| fairytale failure 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThe repetition of love to/love you works really well, especially the single last line that is not in conversation (although at first when I read it, it sounded like you meant you would love to stop.) I could picture voices reading out your conversation; they sounded like things people who are really comfortable with each other would say. |
| peewee potato 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Ahh. |
| losing gracie girl 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusecute. nice job. yours until the wind changes, gg |
| the big crunch 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseit was so sweet and i was smiling the whole time. haha, it was a great piece. |