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young and the reckless 2009-11-03 . chapter 1
this is so incredibly adorable.
that's all i can say :)
tonight we bloom 2009-08-09 . chapter 1
That is so cute! And wonderfully written. It's a pleasure to read your work!
nina know nothing 2008-12-14 . chapter 1
cara, i'm literally smiling in my room alone. i mean what?

this is so genius...
softersin 2008-09-30 . chapter 1
AWEH, thats so cute!
I love it!
You're a very talented writer.
great job and keep it up!
Lady Fingers 2008-04-28 . chapter 1
omg i love this so much
i said that out loud just now during class
as the kids beside me tapped quietly with their own thoughts drowning mine
and i re read each line just to make sure i was reading it right
and how i wish i could have a conversation with someone like this one
and how it reminds me souly of wolf and how our conversations were vaugley similar
and how when i said: "Oh my god i love this."
no one made a sound.
fairytale failure 2008-04-10 . chapter 1
The repetition of love to/love you works really well, especially the single last line that is not in conversation (although at first when I read it, it sounded like you meant you would love to stop.) I could picture voices reading out your conversation; they sounded like things people who are really comfortable with each other would say.
tour d'ivoire 2008-03-30 . chapter 1
I love this.
Ahh.
gg. lass 2008-03-30 . chapter 1
cute.
nice job.

yours until the wind changes,
gg
the big crunch 2008-03-30 . chapter 1
it was so sweet and i was smiling the whole time.
haha, it was a great piece.
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