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Elkica 2008-08-14 . chapter 1
I buried my face in his shoulder, taking his scent in. Knowing him.
I really like the meaning behind this sentence and I found the idea to start at the end and end at the beginning very interesting and it works; although I think it would be a good idea to divide the parts more visibly.
Esquirella 2008-04-02 . chapter 1
That was awesome!
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