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| Georgianna 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was deep. And...I can really understand the narrator. |
| Eve's Deception 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuse"Still, I’m jealous. I would give anything to be her, to be molested. To be worth molesting." thats my favorite. im a sucker for a chilling ending. this piece carries a dark beauty throughout it. it makes me wonder what the intention behind it was, not that it matters. this feels curious to me, just not in a bad way. i like it. what more can be said than that? |
| Sixkiller 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. I just feel so bad for this girl! "To be worth molesting." I just want to hug her or something! As always you wrote this excellently! ^^ |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWow. I didn't expect this to turn out so dark. I love the way the narrator feels so real, especially with that last line, even though it's very disturbing. You've managed to incorporate real feelings in a devastating situation, and because of that I thought this was a strong piece of writing. |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was almost heartbreaking, especially the last line "To be worth molesting." Sadly, I think that's true of a lot of girls and their jealousy of their best friends. I'm not really sure what else there is to say about this. It was very well-written and captivating; the completeness doesn't leave a lot to imagination. Great work, once again. -stix- |