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Reviews For: My Best Friend

Georgianna
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was deep.
And...I can really understand the narrator.
Eve's Deception
2008-05-18
ch 1,
abuse"Still, I’m jealous. I would give anything to be her, to be molested. To be worth molesting."

thats my favorite. im a sucker for a chilling ending.

this piece carries a dark beauty throughout it. it makes me wonder what the intention behind it was, not that it matters. this feels curious to me, just not in a bad way.

i like it.
what more can be said than that?
Sixkiller
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseWow. I just feel so bad for this girl! "To be worth molesting." I just want to hug her or something! As always you wrote this excellently! ^^
Tranquil Thorns
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseWow. I didn't expect this to turn out so dark.

I love the way the narrator feels so real, especially with that last line, even though it's very disturbing. You've managed to incorporate real feelings in a devastating situation, and because of that I thought this was a strong piece of writing.
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseThis was almost heartbreaking, especially the last line "To be worth molesting." Sadly, I think that's true of a lot of girls and their jealousy of their best friends.

I'm not really sure what else there is to say about this. It was very well-written and captivating; the completeness doesn't leave a lot to imagination. Great work, once again.

-stix-
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