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Reviews For: What You Mean To Me

Andwin
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat emotion, I really like it and how you threw in the last like... that is amazing...
Sixkiller
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseHow sad! This wasn't nearly as morbid as I thought it was going to end up lol I must be in a mood, I just want to hug the main character, poor thing!
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseI liked this, although it confused me a lot. I would like to congratulate you on your use of proper grammar - seems like only a fraction of a percent of people that write actually know how to.

What really confused me was the way you started out with "I never really even liked you either" but then at the end you say "I wish you hadn't died." I'd probably have to see it from your perspective to actually understand it.

The entire piece was subtle, yet really harsh at the same time. It was very well-written. Great work.

-stix-
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