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| MagicalThinking 2008-06-15 ch 1,  | abusegreatness! ^_^ I really like the way you write, its clear cut; yet so descriptive. This is a nice piece, its again something i understand lol...great job! |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this... I can relate as can everyone I think. I love the two lines "with every blink/comes a blast of neon" that was a really powerful description. The only thing is those two lines seemed a bit too long with the flow, but other than that I really like it. Nicely done. |
| me. moi. ich. 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abusereminds me of one of my own poems that i posted on fp... sleeping can be very very hard |
| Poetryfreak173 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI SO Know exactly what you're thinking of. |
| Tabytha -DF-5C-NDA- 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of A Story At Three by AFI. Off the Art of Drowning. Everything Davey Havok writes is under his horrid case of insomnia, so you should check it. It was punk. It was cool. Otherwise: Amen, brother. |