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| Eclipsia Soulbird 2008-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseThis is more mature than I expected if I'm understanding the innuendos correctly. "You stimulate my cells" -- for some reason this line really stood out to me. I can't get over how good this is! And I can't get over how envious I am at your talent for poetry (my talent for poetry is somewhere on the negative side of zero). This paints such a violently emotionally explicit picture in my head, in a happy way, and makes me smile. Great work! And those last four lines would leave me speechless if I hadn't just spewed all of the above :) This makes me want to read more, so I'm off to visit your other works :) |