Aw that was SO cute, i even cried >.

O: cliff hanger :D poor cory, i think i know what it is O:

AH! And it ends until the next chapter! I can't wait.

good story so far! I really like the plot line and you developed your characters really well for this just being the first chapter... the only part I thought was a little unbelievable was the part with the mom freaking out, but this still was a great first chapter!

Great story so far. I really like the characters and the story, even if Chazz's parents are sucky. Please update soon.

Good job! It seems like this'll be a great story.