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| Ash Algood 2008-05-11 ch 6,  | abusethat was creepynd im glad i didnt read it at night nd im serious never do something like that again |
| Ash Algood 2008-05-08 ch 5, | abusethe plot thickens so Simon and Hailey r going their seperate ways Elliots been a proved liar Jacob... well he just has issues, the Aegis has morality nd Loki's awesome but y do u make ur chapters so long thats teh #1 thing i hate about ur writing it takes forever to read |
| Ash Algood 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abusewait what spoiler? the thing about years later meaning that Hailey survives the story if thats not it let me know cuz i like spoilers if their available oh nd i thought Jacob had red eyes u made them blue |
| Ash Algood 2008-04-19 ch 3, | abusenevermind jacob is the antagonist i think he just seems creepy nd that croos thing didnt we use that in a campaign its really familiar anyway i like ow all the characters know eachother or are about to meet eachother its really awesome |
| Ash Algood 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abuseYES! i win again i knew it would be hailey cuz well shes teh only chick introduced nd that would make teh plot awesome enyway its good i like the antagonist (unless of course Loki insnt teh antagonist) |
| Ash Algood 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abusethis book reminds me of Torn only without the Angels and Demons nd other aspects of it but nonehteless its beast. its as good as ike is slow nd hes slower then a dead snail but is it navy ships or star ships i think the latter wold be cool but its ur story |
| The-Iry-Last-Sena-Night 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseah! I loved it! I absolutely loved it! amazingly written! I hope you would update it soon! |