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classic violet 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseWow. It's so... I want to say sophisticated, its really good. I love the first stanza and "the weight of your father looking down on you pushing you farther down than gravity" especially
simpleplan13 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseinteresting piece. It describes it really well and I like the middle stanza a lot. The only thing is taking consequences. That phrase sounded odd. Other than that really great piece.
generically beautiful 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abusesniff sniff The last stanza made me tear up. Lovely as always! -Christine