Oh my god, that's so cute! =)
I'm sitting here smiling like a fool right now.
I love the name Gabriel Smalls! He's absolutely charming and oh how I wish I was back in highschool again...

Damn, that was cute.

I love it!

Especially when blondie was the one who acted... less dominant XD

write moar!

that was really good i have a fictionpress name but didn't feel like signing in. well my name is my fictionpress name so look me up b/c my shit sucks lol nah but i really like yours

Aw this was cute!

aww very adorable ^^
you should consider continuing!

I liked this story a lot. It was short, but it was good, and interesting. My only complaint is that I want more, haha. I wish it wasn't a one shot.

Cuute! I love it.

:D

I love it. Your writing voice sounds very natural. The characterizations are great--I can picture both of them.

The ending seemed a little abrupt. I'm not sure where their encounter would lead to next; if it was a chance event or if their relationship might continue.

In any case, great job. :D