i really luv this story and where it's going
plz update soon

O.o VERY INTERESTING! please update sooN!

I love this, so cute, please update.

aw shame, poor Theli! *laughs hysterically* he's all confuzzled and thinking.
oops. I don't think coming out as a leviathan is going to be pretty...

waiting in antici...pation.
Maya

I like this story a lot- and it has great potential. But I kind of wish you'd stop making Eri so...girly. I understand he's submissive and such, and I love that completely- but he cries at everything and stutters so much I have trouble continuing reading. That being said, I do like this story and I love your Theli. Ez on the other hand- needs a lover himself. He seems to be getting rather comfortable being in between Eri and Theli...

ah. I've forgotten everything, but vague details about this story *sniffle* I'll have to reread it sometime, but I'm still happy for the update, because I remember loving this story. dang me and my crappy memory! It's still cute though.

so good! i luv how u switch perspectives every chapter. makes it twice as good!

Well, i you're updating this story along with the others that you have going at the moment, that's sure to be hell.

Wow. I like. God. You guys are going to kill yourselves updating. Have fun with that! ^.^

Aww Eri's such a cutie! >.< I love this story, please keep writing!

Looks AMAZING! couldn't stop reading it, and I hope for more gr8 chapters soon!

Okay, half asleep here so I'm not all that coherent. I am really enjoying this story, I must say. Eez seems to have a strange ulterior motive and I cant figure him out. On the one hand he is trusted by Theli and was reprimanding Theli for contemplating hurting Eri and now he himself wants to hurt the birdie. Almost seems as if he is jealous...

Man, I'm LOVING this story. *snickers* bad Ez-kun, back in your basket! *points to round, futon-like, man-sized basket with a few dark feathers scattered inside* oh, wait, that's mine... where'd I put that spare one... uh... nevermind. *chuckles* poor Eri, I'm beginning to feel pretty sorry for him... I wonder how on earth they're gonna get themselves out of this pickle... hmm... there's something I'm forgetting... oh, I like Theli's spying skills. *purs* verry niice.

perving over Theli,
Maya

YOur-a-GeniuS!!
I-Love-the-Characters!
though-i-don't-like
the-Viridian's-beliefs...

oh dear. poor Eri! *rushes over and gives Eri a hug (at which sisters Merla and Uni literally fall off their perches)* it's okay sweetie, it'll be okay.
*growls darkly* I can't believe those savages went to war over a minor detail like being merged with a beast and not having marraiges. honestly!