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Reviews For: Elizabeth and Joshua

SEMMU
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseAgain, great use of consonance. You love the 'v' sound, don't you?
I'm interested to learn more of your two characters. I'm a former social studies teacher and noticed you mentioned 1863 in SC. Are they runaway slaves trying to make it North? Is Jonathan a Confederate soldier who's fled the war and is hiding his wife and newborn from the home guard? Very interesting. Write on?
Evera19
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseOh, suspenseful! I liked your use of words, nice job.
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