Oh my God, is this about me!? I LOVE YOU, TOO!

-Wally

CoRrEcTiOnS:

why does it say 'i'm writing this to you' twice at the beginning? we {get} what you're saying, you don't need to write it {twice}

get rid of 'at least i don't think so'. why in the milky way would you bother to second guess yourself in a {poem}?

what's with the lines about liking someone who's handsome? don't we all feel that inner stirring when we see someone that's good looking? that's {not} shallow at all.

i thought it was a tiny bit unoriginal.

'beacuse then it would be awkward' duh.

the thing i did like was 'I mean, we’ve never even met.Chances are, we never will.' because it was a twist on a chiche idea.

-Talia
(the {} mean italics, in case you didn't know that)

I have been writing poems like that for months, so I really like this one.
I did not just say that. Ahem.

CC

this is really cute. [: