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| BWeep 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseHahaz...The changes in this chapter really are minor~ I'll message you with some of the errors I picked up so check your inbox! Looking forward to the other chapters, and the dude who reviewed before me is right. More of Tir! ...dialogue-wise, at least. |
| Genato 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseHmm.. not much has changed but you already told me that. The first version's great though, don't know why you would still want to change it. I'll review again after a few chapters and when everything changes. Ohh.. can I make a request? Can you have more scenes with Tir in it? I really love that guy. lol. Also, can't wait for the re=edited version of Tir's lament. Oh yeah, I was wondering, are you planning on changing the endings? That's it and good luck with this. Before I go, I'm glad I was the first one to review! But it's not much since there's nothing much changing yet. Good luck! |