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Justin Vengeance 2008-09-16 ch 1,	abuseSame things. no periods or capitalization. Question marks are good though. Also remember you don't have to stick to the 57577 rule. That was only intended for school children to learn the basic grasp of the poetry style, the basic line up is short long short long long. So feel free to be creative without such restriction. I enjoy your tanka's, whats your native language by the way? it looks like spainish, but I don't know enough to guess, haha
Widdershin Wizard 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseA sad little piece, but well written. Touching, in a certain way.
electric feel 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseit's beautiful and it looks wonderful below - is that Spanish or is it Portuguese?